rays from the sun mine if I am not mindful
is a sunburn pure which I will feel for days for sure
while feeling red skin blister burnt waiting for cure
rays absorbed thoughtless cause sunburn a skinful
Copyright © Terence George Craddock
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Wow...so wonderful drafting and nice answer to the poem Life has a meaning. Whether I am mindful or not but still I get free sun rays those benefit me. In surety of mind I feel each day is pure definitely. Rays are absorbed through thoughts to shine. Very much philosophical approach to define idea and life. Very, very interesting poem and excellent expression shared. Thank you very much. May God bring lots of happiness for you and your family. You have delighted me really with your fantastic poetic gift. Thanks once again.10