Excessive Sun Rays Absorbed Thoughtless Poem by Terence George Craddock

Excessive Sun Rays Absorbed Thoughtless

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rays from the sun mine if I am not mindful
is a sunburn pure which I will feel for days for sure
while feeling red skin blister burnt waiting for cure
rays absorbed thoughtless cause sunburn a skinful


Copyright © Terence George Craddock

Sunday, January 3, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: summer
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Inspired by the poem 'Life Has A Meaning' by the poet Kumarmani Mahakul.
Dedicated to the poet Kumarmani Mahakul.
Written in December 2015 and January 2016 on the 18.12.2015 & 4.11.2016.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 04 January 2016

Wow...so wonderful drafting and nice answer to the poem Life has a meaning. Whether I am mindful or not but still I get free sun rays those benefit me. In surety of mind I feel each day is pure definitely. Rays are absorbed through thoughts to shine. Very much philosophical approach to define idea and life. Very, very interesting poem and excellent expression shared. Thank you very much. May God bring lots of happiness for you and your family. You have delighted me really with your fantastic poetic gift. Thanks once again.10

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