Exclusive Few Lines Designed For..... Poem by Geetha Jayakumar

Exclusive Few Lines Designed For.....



Few lines designed Exclusively for the second last page!
When I lost all my desires and hope to live.
Life is now pulling me back into its illusionary web.
Especially tempting me with lucrative offers
Exclusively dressed for me.
May be to trap me into its magical web.
I want to turn down all offers including this life!
Why don't you offer me the one which I needed always?
Why everything goes in opposite way
Keeps haunting me?
When I fluttered and cried inside cage
Where were you?
Now when I got used to it,
You want to free me.

Now what's the use?
For everything, age and time has it own limitations........
Can I stand under chilling cold waterfall for too long?
Can I go for trekking which I loved once?
Can I go for long driving?
Can I have as much as Ice cream I want?
Can I eat sugarcane with my teeth?
Can I dance, can I run, can I play, in rain....

Today, I prefer to be remain tied as ever,
Whether my desires are caged or not!

Now at this age if I do all such things all of a sudden
Will not people call me insane?
Can my health withstand it after a long gap of time?
Can I run like before?
Can my wings flutter again?
Now with my wings broken how can I fly again?
When you gave wings to fly
Why did you kept me caged ever?

Now I don't want to fly....
I have stopped dreaming anything!
At least don't take away that last choice from me!

After all the desires being caged for long
Today, all got washed away
Cage is free from any desire!
Sea shore is peaceful as ever! ! !

You may think what is in the last page?
Well the last page will be the answer for all the questions, unanswered!
Which the readers will write on their pages with their heart in it.
Ha..Ha....Ha..SmilesI

©ALL RIGHTS RESERVED BY GEETHA JAYAKUMAR 2014
© 2014

Tuesday, July 22, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: life
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Note....Chill...just for fun I wrote.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valsa George 02 August 2014

At the end of a tortuous journey, you have come with a comical conclusion! While reading the poem I was in a different mental make up! But the end has really relieved me! But I must say comical is the twist, Geetha! The poem has some powerful images! !

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Amitava Sur 23 July 2014

Geetha - considering this as a fun write even, I would like to say... A BELATED VERDICT IS VERDICT DENIED . IT'S NOT A VERDICT AT ALL. Chill... just for fun I wrote... Ha Ha.

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Salini Nair 23 July 2014

When you gave wings to fly Why did you kept me caged ever? .................agrahikmpol kittathathum avasyamillathapol kittunnathumaya onnanallo jeevitham...............you wrote it in the full verve with fun..............like it

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