Geetha Jayakumar
Kerala Palakkad
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The Real Of Me!

Rating: 4.8
Often I portray myself as bright and cheerful,
For it's my art of sketching me bold and beautiful.

While drawing a sketch I hide all my dark colors and
All my weaknesses, I mask with bright colors.

I never show what I lack in.
I try to show more than what I am.
I present myself as cheerful,
With a friendly smile.
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Friday, October 24, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: life,reality
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COMMENTS
Shamsul Husain 18 May 2019
Nicely expressed, Geetha.
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Israj Ali 17 September 2018
Now I look younger and greener than real I am. I hide all my pain, ugliness, hatred, anger, selfishness, Behind my beautiful mask of smile.-a very nice poem has been written-10
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A marvelous poem that depicts realities of life. An honest write beautifully crafted. So inspiring.10++++
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Indira Renganathan 30 June 2018
All well said in the last stanza! ! ...a very great work..thank you very much for this superb poem and your visit and comment Geetha
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Every mask will fall. Every life will have meanings. You are real.
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Astha Tiwari 06 September 2017
Mam, this is a wonderful poem. I really like it.
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Kumarmani Mahakul 05 September 2017
Beautiful poem eloquently expressed. The most important quality that a person should posses is smile. Let me quoted... I present myself As cheerful and pleasant one With a friendly smile. Beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing.
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Tom Allport 26 May 2017
a poem that unlike a mirror shows a true reflection of ones inner beautiful self? ....well penned
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Rajnish Manga 04 April 2017
You have put across quite beautifully the psychology of a young lady who would hide her negative points and show off and highlight her positive ones- her charming smile being on the top. Thanks. Now I look younger and greener than real I am. I hide all my pain, ugliness, hatred, anger, selfishness, Behind my beautiful mask of smile.
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Looking at the beautiful image of another as his own.Human nature very well described in the poem.Thanks for sharing.
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