Exercise Poem by Pallab Chaudhury

Exercise

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It took long time
To make a portrait.
Seeing that you said- It's nice.
Then, I put so much of effort
To recite a poem.
You said- It's also nice.
With rigorous exercise
I tried to sing a song.
Your tongue uttered
The same NICE.

When I felt
The need of the hour-
The heart started to palpitate.
Painstakingly I said- I love you…
But, by seeing your silence
I understood-

A lot- yet to learn!

(Dated: 25-10-2017) .

Thursday, October 26, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: love and life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 26 October 2017

A lot of exercises are inbuilt in this marvelous piece of work..! The philosophical articulation has much depth in it..I loved your poem

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Pallab Chaudhury 18 November 2017

inspired me.... Thank you for your comments. With best wishes.

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