silent escape
of evening sun, leaving me
lonely sitting!
Dated: 28th Jan 2023.
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Pallab, you have so perfectly expressed the loneliness that one feels at sunset. What a great poem!
A beautiful three liner! It says your melancholy at the parting of the sun!
We need the sun to illuminate and warm our lives. The world is lonely indeed when such things escape us! 5*****
Naughty sun. it should have told you before leaving! Nice three liner. Enjoyed your piece
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Delightful short work.....thank u...
Thanks and with best wishes..............