Exercising This Spirit Poem by RoseAnn V. Shawiak

Exercising This Spirit



Silent awakening filtering through subconsciousness, giving this
mind a truthful and intensive belonging, clinging to an interior
peace that continually fills this being.

Letting self flow into the recesses of another time and dimension
where life no longer exists, finding an entity of the Divine that
energizes this being fully.

Exercising this spirit with a wonderful and tantalizing array of
feelings, floating into sound, exploding colors of intense justi-
fication of what lies beyond the curtains of death.

Friday, August 18, 2017
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Daniel Brick 20 August 2017

That is one way - a creative way - to approach Life After Death. Hamlet says in his TO BE OR NOT TO BE, no one comes back to the world after death, but he had just talked to the Ghost who does just that! ! Was Shakespeare aware of this inconsistency? Did it matter to him? It bothers me. But there is no inconsistency in your poem. You speak confidently and intimately about life and death, there is quiet acceptance. You don't try to say more than what you know. It's feelings that concern you, not thoughts.

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