Reality Of Both Lives Poem by RoseAnn V. Shawiak

Reality Of Both Lives

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Looking through tears of a lifetime,
looking out of fear, seeing inside
that being with God is so precious.

He's shown me that my little life
here on earth is very precious
to Him and I know that more than
ever now.

Touching my soul has brought
insight to mind that I may see the
reality of both lives.

Tuesday, August 20, 2013
Topic(s) of this poem: poem
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 14 November 2014

without a poet's note i would be somewhat at a loss to know what you are talking about, except that you've already given me some background already. my wife just called me to supper. thanks for sharing. :) bri

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Edward Kofi Louis 23 May 2015

Tears of a lifetime! Yes, life is always with past memories. All the same, we have to move with a positive note.

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Sanjibsaha Aniketa 07 July 2015

The feeling of self and selfness towards god.

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Bharati Nayak 19 August 2015

Going deep into soul, seeing life through its pains and sufferings, its fears and worries comes the realisation that this little life is very precious in its worldly duties and after it departs from this earth..By belief in God that the poet gets the insight to understand the value of life. Thanksfor sharing the insightful poem.

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Bri Edwards 21 April 2018

i left a 'poor' comment a few years ago. i've reread it and haven't much else to say....[i WOULD use Earth, not earth]....except i hope that if anyone sees God, someday it will be you [for the second time? ? ]. bri ;)

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Roger Horsch 21 December 2017

It sounds as if you wrote what I have felt for a long time and are still feeling now. a wonderful poem. I have already read it several times and will probably read it more.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 21 April 2016

Oh how lovely lines these are... Looking through tears of a lifetime, looking out of fear, seeing inside I loved the stanza... Touching my soul has brought insight to mind that I may see the reality of both lives. Thank you poet for sharing it.

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Howard Savage 01 February 2016

Looking through tears of a lifetime, is a power message. Great poem. #10

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Walterrean Salley 20 January 2016

Being with God is more precious than anything. Seeing both lives gives a wonderful hope, in that this life is not the end. There is another after this. The child of God anticipates the afterlife. Thank you for this most beautiful poem.

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