Soumita Sarkar Ray

Gold Star - 6,303 Points (Kolkata)

Exit - Poem by Soumita Sarkar Ray

Where lies the need to mend?
It was from heaven send
Apt in size and cover
Light and luring to bear
Metal when hot spread
Feeling when hot burst
To cool then many must sweat
Ah! remains of blown fire
Black soot all over
Lay down of arms
Rumors don't fly
In case the seizure delays
Do make a hurried exit

Topic(s) of this poem: life


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  • (3/21/2015 8:46:00 AM)


    Beautiful poem. Metal when hot spreads feelings when hot burst.....Exit we must in a situation like that. Thank you for sharing. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, March 21, 2015

Poem Edited: Saturday, March 21, 2015


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