Soumita Sarkar Ray

Gold Star - 6,326 Points (Kolkata)

Touch Me..... See Me - Poem by Soumita Sarkar Ray

Come and hold me tight
With no streak of light
to come close between two
sublime bodies of faith

Come smell me through mind
Shallow and depth defined
Then wind of plain delight
Shall bathe you every night

Come see me with your soul
that craves for a cozy nest
and crimson melodious feather
to caress and ignite forever

Come feel me with your tongue
Lives so meaningless shall
rejuvenate in my spring
to love bloom, pain shall ring

Come and read mystery in eyes
That spell magic on beholders
And sends rivers of solace
down the reeds of lonely gates

Topic(s) of this poem: love educates

Comments about Touch Me..... See Me by Soumita Sarkar Ray

  • Dev Anand (8/16/2017 5:04:00 AM)

    come close between two
    sublime bodies of faith come and smell me, Come see me with your soul
    Come feel me with your tongue Come and read mystery in eyes

    wonderful lines full of love and passion... thank u dear poet. dev
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  • Queeny Gona (5/17/2017 4:55:00 AM)

    Very Passionate read! (Report) Reply

  • Vaidyanathan Ram Iyer (5/9/2017 12:05:00 PM)

    Beautiful and touched the heart.Thank you (Report) Reply

  • (2/24/2017 10:22:00 AM)

    Hi Soumita,

    A poem of passion, love. Definitely a little sensuous. Beautifully rendered. Choice of words, rhyme and rhythm totally in tune with the emotions they are intended to convey. Fantastic write. A full 10+++
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  • Salman Sayeed (7/29/2016 1:27:00 PM)

    Beautiful and romantic poem. Thank you mam for sharing (Report) Reply

  • Kishore Kumar Das (5/9/2016 10:37:00 AM)

    What a cocktail of sensuality with love........what a brilliance in showing the nexus between romanticism and philosophy.....through your touch I shall see love in your eyes.......full 10 marks to you... (Report) Reply

  • Edward Kofi Louis (4/6/2016 11:22:00 AM)

    With no streak of light! Only with the muse of sweet love. Nice piece of work. (Report) Reply

  • Souren Mondal (11/8/2015 7:34:00 PM)

    Sensual, romantic, and vivid in it's description... Loved the manner in which this monologue actually appeals to the intended speaker and the final stanza:

    'Come and read mystery in eyes
    That spell magic on beholders
    And sends rivers of solace
    down the reeds of lonely gates'

    is a really fine ending...

    Love indeed educates us..,

    Thank you for sharing :)
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  • Dr.tony Brahmin (9/7/2015 5:59:00 AM)

    Hold me tight,
    Come and smell me with defined depth. delight shall bathe you every night.
    See me with your soul, cozy nest, caress, ignite.
    Feel me with your tounge and sense the mystery in my eyes. Oh Saumita, it is passion, it is eros, it is love and it has depth. thank you for this pleasant poem. i like it soo much. tony
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  • Amitava Sur (8/3/2015 6:49:00 AM)

    A lovely penning with a romantic feel and intense emotion. Enjoyed your expression. (Report) Reply

  • Melvina Germain (7/29/2015 2:33:00 AM)

    This flow of beauty soothes my soul, such an amazing romantic touch leaving heart prints within. I love the magic that trickles so beautifully though this poem...Thank you for sharing Soumita..... (Report) Reply

  • Jacob Macharia (7/14/2015 6:02:00 AM)

    Just come...if words can explain it all...great (Report) Reply

  • Kinyua Karanja (7/8/2015 2:43:00 AM)

    Wonderful Romantic poem it's among the i have read so far. (Report) Reply

  • Ramesh Rai (7/1/2015 8:36:00 AM)

    Come see me with your soul
    What a fantastic write!
    Amazing composition and selection of words
    Beautiful sensual and exhilarating thought developed with your beautiful emotion. Wonderful! Wonderful! Wonderful! Thanks for sharing +10.
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  • Kelly Kurt (4/1/2015 11:29:00 PM)

    a very sensual poem. Romantic and deep. Thanks for sharing it. (Report) Reply

  • Savita Tyagi (3/21/2015 9:06:00 AM)

    Wonderful poem. enjoyed. Come seek me through my a reader I will do to venture in your world..... Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Khairul Ahsan (3/15/2015 1:19:00 PM)

    I am reading a poem of yours after a very long gap. I loved this poem and also the only comment made on it so far.
    The first stanza is a delightful invitation to intermix and the second stanza is truly exquisite. Perception of love through both physical and mental smelling is a very passionate thought that drew my imagination. The third describes a craving for ignition and the fourth seeks a youthful rejuvenation. The last stanza soothes the mind with the words of solace.
    A wonderful poem over all.
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  • Sankar Sarkar (3/15/2015 9:53:00 AM)

    Both emotion and passion get percolated into exquisite thoughts and ideas that are synchronized in philosophic expanse........ Come smell me through mind.......... bathe you every night.......nice poetic assertion..lots a thank (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, March 15, 2015

Poem Edited: Monday, March 16, 2015

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