Till your heart my long search ends
You turn into a hope that remains
Shoots of my desires started to settle
To find a corner in you to huddle
Day begins only to feel you closer
Drink in you, eat you, smell you and smear
Still the eagerness to know you more
Gives a tug and leads me to a door
Door shall open the recess of your mind
Deep layers of your being thus I find
Each pulse and cell echoes in your name
Your hair, your sweat, touch and game
To narrate in you a life that is mine
I wish to be your part that is my twine
We shall built on earth a nest like heaven
With feathers of me and you twined and woven
It's a genuine dream of a lovely soul. What you express in this poem seems realistic one..A lovely poem. Keep writing!
the most unkindest thing to do for any poet is not to thank the ones who loved your composition here i see mostly older men but LOVE is common to all human you may even now make amends o poet of DREAMS
the close bond cemented between you and your dream....owner's pride.......passionate love in abundance in your splendid verses..
[...]To find a corner in you to huddle Day begins only to feel you closer Drink in you, eat you, smell you and smear Still the eagerness to know you more Gives a tug and leads me to a door[...] Passionate? Yes.. Romantic? Only with the CAPITAL 'R'.... There is obviously a 'desire' in the speaker to be 'united' in love with the 'object' of this desire.. But somehow, the verbs in use - 'wish', 'shall' etc. suggest a very different story perhaps.. The poem, to me, can actually be read more like a 'dream' than 'reality'... We can perhaps never 'know' the one we 'love' - once we do, unfortunately, it doesn't last... Not sure whether to call this a poem of dreams coming true or dreams REMAINING dreams.. Either ways, it is a poem incredibly well crafted.. Thank you for sharing..
So true, we can; t show love, and when we do so its already gone....this is a dream inside a dream.Thanks.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Lovely, a match from heaven, and probably a dream come true. the eloquence of a passionate poetess, expressed in words.