Experience Poem by DEEPAK KUMAR PATTANAYAK

Experience

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Experience
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Ups and downs
Are routine in
A man's life
Sometimes depressed
Sometimes elated
Through the toils of life
Yet how small they seem
When experience teaches us aright
Like scattered pebbles
Rolling down a mountain streamlet
Bringing sweet melody of flows
Sparkling like sunshine
In hours of sorrows
Miles and miles I walk
And find a path that looks
Merely charming
And dullness it lacks
Clinging to it, falling
I see of me and myself
For the path I am treading
Is chosen of ignorance

Wednesday, October 15, 2014
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Hazel Durham 16 October 2014

With such beautiful lines, we chose our different paths in life at times out of ignorance we are compelled to chose the wrong path but we learn to know who we really are! ! Thank you so much for the lovely comments on my poems!

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Salini Nair 16 October 2014

Ups and downs Are routine in A man's life Sometimes depressed Sometimes elated Through the toils of life....................beautiful lines enjoyed the poem

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Valsa George 16 October 2014

When we feel glum, a walk through a country path will definitely lift our spirits.....! In the same way as we progress and pass through varied experiences, we feel that momentary ups and downs of life cannot depress us any more! Great write, Deepak!

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Geetha Jayakumar 15 October 2014

Beautiful poem. Very true said in few lines...... Miles and miles I walk And find a path that looks Merely charming And dullness it lacks Clinging to it, falling I see of me and myself For the path I am treading Is chosen of ignorance Experience teach us a lot, be it good or bad and using these experiences we travel in path unknown. Once again a thoughtful write.

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