Sunday, May 17, 2009

Expressing The Way I Feel Comments

Rating: 5.0

you know, not many people make me feel the way you do,
so safe with every word that you seem to speak,
you know just what to say when i'm feeling down,
to make my day seem a lot brighter,
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mona martinez
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Shashendra Amalshan 25 May 2009

wow..thats great..yeah must be some lucky guy indeed...so well expressed..everything is meant to be Mona....10++ regards shan

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Delicate Heart 19 May 2009

very nice piece, written eloquently, ................................and a ten from Delicate

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this is beautifully written and told. lucky is the guy whom this was written for.. if i were him, i woudl not slip up.

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