Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi


Eyes........... - Poem by Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi

I captured your frame the moment I had seen,
I draw the fence around to keep you, mine,
I strengthen the security painting the lashes,
Coloring the boundary with reflective bases,
I close the entrance whenever you are noticed,
Safe in the pupil and comfortable in my heart,
I will not let you to see other naked tiers,
I will not let you to drown in the well of hot tears,
I will not use foreign materials to make you drowsy,
As you are there in my eyes, I never behave flimsy.


Comments about Eyes........... by Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi

  • Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar (4/6/2012 10:10:00 PM)


    the first two lines are marvelous. a lovely love poem. shan (Report) Reply

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  • (4/4/2012 2:20:00 PM)


    very well written with passionate intensity! (Report) Reply

  • Raj Arumugam (4/3/2012 4:24:00 PM)


    very loving lines, VS...the lines speak of a deep and intense love... (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, April 3, 2012

Poem Edited: Tuesday, April 3, 2012


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