Pratisha Karki

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Eyes - Poem by Pratisha Karki

He smiled at me and gave that infectious look,
poured all the love from them
and said that they loved me a lot
I couldn’t believe at all

However they kept following me everywhere never leaving me alone
saying that they really miss and want to kiss me
Those addictive eyes were everywhere
asking me to love them back
my little heart surrendered to them
and spilled all the love inside it.
It was dying to be meet with its soul mate and get vanished in another world far away from everyone and everywhere.


However when I tried to hug them they smiled and disappeared
making me realize that he was just a ghost…trying to make me his host

Topic(s) of this poem: love

Form: Acrostic


Comments about Eyes by Pratisha Karki

  • Souren Mondal (11/14/2015 4:07:00 AM)


    A very interesting poem with a nice finale.. Thank you for sharing Pratisha.. (Report) Reply

    Pratisha Karki (11/18/2015 5:40:00 PM)

    Thank You So Much!

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Poem Submitted: Friday, November 13, 2015

Poem Edited: Friday, November 13, 2015


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