Eyes Poem by Hiroshi Satow

Eyes

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walking about aimlessly
in a backstreet of Tokyo
on a June afternoon
I saw a dog
in a hut-like house
from out of the window
looking obediently
looking sad

I know his eyes
it was when I was a kid
waiting for Mom
in a hut-like house
from out of the window
looking obediently
looking sad

Thursday, June 25, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: dog,sadness
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anil Kumar Panda 29 June 2020

Great expression of love and care for the one you are waiting. Perfect metaphor. Loved it.

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Mahtab Bangalee 25 June 2020

Eyes Obedient eyes Silent, calm.... Wanna say many.. But all with voiceless.... Someday the eyes go forever closelessly....for loyal love

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Varsha M 25 June 2020

A perfect metaphoric expression. Even I too felt the same. Beautiful.

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