F: Dishwashing Competition Poem by Margaret Alice

F: Dishwashing Competition

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For me it’s a meditation
I do it slowly, lovingly
crying if I need to
or singing softly

But when Hans and Thea
come visiting dishwashing
becomes a competition, how fast
how many, in how short a time

In and out of the basin
in one sweeping movement
no time for quiet contemplation
I have to compete or be left behind

Forget silent action, sweet dedication
to thorough peacefulness,
my innocuous alienation - an escape
from too many people -

Is taken from me!
I rack my brains to
offer amiable conversation
without touching upon

The sweet elation
of the unknown
and strange
mystery…

Saturday, April 28, 2007
Topic(s) of this poem: dedication,meditation
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Francesca Johnson 28 April 2007

I've never looked at dishwashing as anything other than a distasteful chore. Maybe I should do it meditatively, like you do, slowly and with feeling? Nah, I'll use the dishwasher! Love, Fran xx

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Derrick Clark 28 April 2007

that was a creative topic. it sound good to me.

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Madly In Love 28 April 2007

Amazing poem Margaret

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Pretoria - South Africa
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