Fading Vision Comments

I like this poem very much. The idea of the darkness fading itself through imagination bringing light back is very interesting and very well built into the poem itself. Darkness is described in words which makes the reader -at least me- dive into it, and the faint transition between darkness and bright life is as subtle as it is in life. And yet this is this faint transition which makes us feel hope and brightness... A wonderful write here! '10' :)

the 'darkness' one may feel in life has been very well poetically pictured here...when there isn't a ray of hope in life, when life gets cold and pinches out one is forced to live guessing about life...a good poem.10

this is profound...thanks for the poems

Nice lines pal......good write...keep up... Fahim