Failure Poem by Srinidhi S U

Failure

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A castle of dreams on thin air
A kingdom of thoughts and desire
Crumbled down, no words to share.
Silence swept the pandemonium of failure.

Thoughts trickled down the dark mind.
Timeless bond, treasures, triumph
Of ecstasy vanished far behind
As the sight blurred with the loss of path.

What now stands amidst nowhere is I
Picking up the broken blocks, to rebuild
The empire that reigned my dream
Far away but, I do see a ray of hope
From the great castle of my golden realm.

Prof Srinidhi S U
09 Jan 2022

Saturday, January 8, 2022
Topic(s) of this poem: determination,dreams,failure,lonely,loss,sadness
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
saugat karki 09 January 2022

You are amazing srinidi sir.

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Chinedu Dike 09 January 2022

Thought provoking, insightful and motivational....A work of an intricate mind. Remain enriched.

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Neetu 08 January 2022

Beautiful

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 08 January 2022

just beautiful language that I can relate to Bravo!

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David Wood 08 January 2022

Castles made of dreams evaporating in the air is a good metaphor

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Sullia, Karnataka, India
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