The Big Tree Fell Poem by Srinidhi S U

The Big Tree Fell

Rating: 4.7


Here it is, there it is,
Lying around in a hundred piece
A victim of man's desire. Hell!
Oh God! The big tree fell!

I see it every morning,
I see it every evening,
No! I don't see it anymore!
For it fell dead, my tears outpour.

Years hundred, mighty, it stood.
Now, just loads of log and wood.
All the lives it carried merry,
With dead grief, they ran in hurry.

To hundreds of birds and monkeys,
To squirrels, butterflies and bees,
It was a haven, a place to dwell,
But now all I can shout and tell
Is " The big tree fell! The big tree fell! "

Thursday, December 28, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: grief
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
A grief stricken day where I witnessed the tree I have seen since 13 years, chopped off for some activity. I mourn its loss through the poem
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Abhimanyu Kumar.s 28 December 2017

Amazing write. Outburst of powerful loss and fertility. Keep up the good work

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Jazib Kamalvi 07 January 2018

A fine start with a nice poem, Srinidhi. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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Rubeen sultana 29 December 2017

Just wonderful poem..well done

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Anonymous 29 December 2017

This is really good one

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Srinidhi S U 28 December 2017

Thank you Dr Dillip Thank you Abhimanyu Sir :

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Dr Dillip K Swain 28 December 2017

Wonderful poem is shared I liked the poetic expression...10

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Srinidhi S U

Srinidhi S U

Sullia, Karnataka, India
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