Darkangel Flyfree

Rookie - 54 Points (11/29/82)

Fallen - Poem by Darkangel Flyfree

I've fallen down
this deep dark well
and I can't get out
I call for help
as loud as I can
'Help can anybody hear me
please help me'.
But nobody comes
nobody can hear me
I'm trapped in this
void of darkness
nobody's there to pull me out
nothing but dark walls
surround me
sitting upon this stone
with water surrounding me
cold and scared
filled with hopeless wishes
glistening from within
the waters surface
waiting, just waiting...

Comments about Fallen by Darkangel Flyfree

  • (10/29/2012 10:46:00 AM)

    sometimes the responses come from unusual places....listen deep in the night and hear the souls that come to stand at your side as you suffer the pangs of the lonely and sad... great write. I gave it a 10.... (Report) Reply

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  • (5/27/2012 6:31:00 PM)

    The poem is excellent. I can relate to the loneliness and calls for help with no response. (Report) Reply

  • Shihabudheen K J (5/27/2012 12:28:00 PM)

    Feels like a weird dream caught in a dead well.you r not alone, cheers, fly free off the well. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, May 26, 2012

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