Khaleelulla syed.A

Rookie - 0 Points (18/07/1988 / bengaluru)

Fallen Flower - Poem by Khaleelulla syed.A

Lying there untouched,
Unseen forever.
Leaving back its value,
Its sanctity, its chastity.

Stamped, rubbed,
Dragged by everyone.
Yet, no whisper,
No cry nothing.

Carried away by wind,
Flows forever.
Homeless, nameless, lifeless
As a extinct.

All that beauty,
The unforgetable smile,
the purest colour,
Vanished, once for all, forever.

Forever it sacrificed,
All it had.
All left with it,
Just to llive,
Live once more.


Comments about Fallen Flower by Khaleelulla syed.A

  • (6/21/2011 7:33:00 AM)


    all of life is but a rose petal fallen, dissolving back into the nameless, bringing forth life again... like this poem very much! (Report) Reply

    1 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • Bancroft Boreland (6/20/2011 10:23:00 AM)


    i feel pity for this fallen flower. its like its a person. (Report) Reply

  • (6/2/2011 10:01:00 AM)


    Loved this part specially! ! ! 'Stamped, rubbed,
    Dragged by everyone.
    Yet, no whisper,
    No cry nothing' Nice use of rhymes and imagery! ! ! ! Love it! ! !
    (Report) Reply

  • (6/1/2011 11:31:00 PM)


    All that I can say bout that poem is 'beautiful' (Report) Reply

  • (5/12/2011 12:21:00 AM)


    Great poem Khalilullah. It was rich in imagery and style.
    Very deep indeed.
    Thanks for sharing.....
    (Report) Reply

Read all 5 comments »



Read this poem in other languages

This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.

I would like to translate this poem »

word flags

What do you think this poem is about?



Poem Submitted: Wednesday, April 27, 2011

Poem Edited: Thursday, May 12, 2011


[Report Error]