Fallen Flower Poem by Khaleelulla syed.A

Fallen Flower

Rating: 3.5


Lying there untouched,
Unseen forever.
Leaving back its value,
Its sanctity, its chastity.

Stamped, rubbed,
Dragged by everyone.
Yet, no whisper,
No cry nothing.

Carried away by wind,
Flows forever.
Homeless, nameless, lifeless
As a extinct.

All that beauty,
The unforgetable smile,
the purest colour,
Vanished, once for all, forever.

Forever it sacrificed,
All it had.
All left with it,
Just to llive,
Live once more.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Eric Cockrell 21 June 2011

all of life is but a rose petal fallen, dissolving back into the nameless, bringing forth life again... like this poem very much!

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Bancroft Boreland 20 June 2011

i feel pity for this fallen flower. its like its a person.

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Pamuditha Zen Anjana 02 June 2011

Loved this part specially! ! ! 'Stamped, rubbed, Dragged by everyone. Yet, no whisper, No cry nothing' Nice use of rhymes and imagery! ! ! ! Love it! ! !

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Craig Mize 01 June 2011

All that I can say bout that poem is 'beautiful'

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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 12 May 2011

Great poem Khalilullah. It was rich in imagery and style. Very deep indeed. Thanks for sharing.....

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