dafydd jabber redman


Family - Poem by dafydd jabber redman

I see the Sand nice and gritty soft through my toes like if it warm, wrath as a smothy love is not in me only a lower process. of grovey singing a sad song in a my heart is beating., me down in a small soft breeze i see the leaves slowly rolling down the tree. never more owing the heart of the trees, walking through the park gates of life my kid's are playing a they should be laughing for joy. dad come and pay for that we want an ice gream thats the way life should be, sat by there mum wail she looks at me and smiles as i give my wife a strawberry flowered rose saying i am now free. from sand beneath my feet. and all the hell has gone from in side me, i live the life as i don't party, a grait to love my family.

Topic(s) of this poem: life


Poet's Notes about The Poem

At the time I did not care about my wife or my kid's all I did is party

Comments about Family by dafydd jabber redman

  • Dafydd Paul Redman (3/19/2015 9:50:00 AM)


    Thank you Mr dave walker, thank you professor kumarmani mahakul for your feedback (Report) Reply

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  • Kumarmani Mahakul (3/18/2015 5:52:00 PM)


    I see the Sand nice and gritty... Really very nice composition shared here. Nice poem on family topic. (Report) Reply

  • (3/18/2015 5:37:00 PM)


    It sounds like you have learned from your mistakes, an honest poem. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, March 18, 2015



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