Saturday, March 26, 2011

Fantasy Begonia Comments

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Flow again, yes, go again
Will you My last begonia
After a brief siesta!
Immortal love! Immortal life
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Ahmad Shiddiqi
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Jenny Gordon 01 April 2011

Beautiful, fascinating, with delightful imagery! Very lovely! I did not really decipher the deeper message contained in the imagery, but it is quite the interesting and attractive picture, excepting the concluding lines/stanza seems to be foreboding. Intriguing and lovely.

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nice poem, unique, was interesting to hear some new terminology to, keep it up.

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Ahmad Shiddiqi

Ahmad Shiddiqi

Semarang, Central Java, Indonesia
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