Thursday, November 13, 2025

Far From Reality Comments

Rating: 5.0

In my dream there lies a garden,
Roses growing wild and free.
Where we talk away the hours,
It's our place just you and me.
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Jayne Louise Davies
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Nabakishore Dash 16 November 2025

A dream is far away from us when we visualise it in REM sleep, sometimes very happy, sometimes unhappy. However u depicted a good picture of your dream by appropriately chosen words.

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Rebecca Navarre 13 November 2025

Beautifully and magnificently expressed! .. Ever so heart felt! .. Endless 10'S And Stars! ..+++++++++++++++++++++++++++

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Rebecca Navarre 13 November 2025

Ohh, How deeply heart touching and beautifully described! .. Draws the reader right into each word and each line! ..

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 13 November 2025

Dreams are far from reality but sometimes they keep us alive. A wonderful poem well expressed.

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Timber Koleden 13 November 2025

So very well written, full of beautiful rhyme and rhythm and imagery! So fabulous as ever! Thank you for sharing another grand piece!

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Jayne Louise Davies

Jayne Louise Davies

Abercynon, Rhondda Cynon Taff
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