Farewell... Poem by jennifer her

Farewell...

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Farewell is a word that is filled with sorrow...
a word that promises nothing
except sad goodbyes...
You wave a sudden goodbye,
i stood against the frame of the rusty door...
glancing at you while you said your
pleasant farewell...
The form you were given disappears
within the thick fog...i can no longer
hear your voice or the warm touch...
On the day you left, it felt like a millennium...
wondering when i am able to see you again...
the smile that made me so happy...
These childish memories of ours you had left behind
with an unexpected parting...
whispering like the wind...
saying goodbye...
Your farewell, those last words
felt so meaningful, but it was like a flickering
memory lost in a stream of
consciousness...
But even though...
not even once in my memories...
like in a deep sleep...it felt like an
eternity...you were never
a forgotten dream...
Don't say goodbye
nor the sad farewells...
Far or near,
Whereever you go...
i want to become the sky for you
so when you glazely look upon me...
i am always there...
You left a divine smile for me...
with a simple prayer, leaving me behind...i pray...
even if your far away...you'll always have a place
in my heart to come back to...
Farewell...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
J H 29 March 2007

Beautiful. I love it very much, it feels like a lingering sad melody in the air, thank you for sharing Johan

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Nyrical Poet 26 March 2007

Jennifer, Doc is correct, farewells are definitely hard, and very sad. This was a well written piece of literature. Thank you for sharing! Always, Nick

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Puppy Luver (10 yrs.old) 24 March 2007

a very sweet poem about goodbyes and farewells-I liked it because i know what it is like-I have to say goodbye to may Daddy every night by phone,

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Someone Else 23 March 2007

nice piece of free verse on a sad farewell-which sometimes are not so sad.

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