Thursday, June 5, 2008

Farewell My Love Comments

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Farewell my love for I must go
To walk that lonely road ahead,
But here my heart shall stay with you
While I alone must face that dread.
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ANDREW BLAKEMORE
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Kesav Easwaran 13 July 2009

I have always admired the way you perfect your lines with counts rhythm and rhymes...and this write is no exception...i like the romantic emotions the poem carries inside...of course with its tinge of grief...thanks...10

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Lynda Robson 06 June 2008

Another lovely flowing poem, sometimes we have to leave a loved one for whatever reason and walk alone, well penned Andrew, Lynda xx

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Sarah Abu Zeid 06 June 2008

really good work keep it up ur poem just captured my heart

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