Fashion Statement Poem by Dónall Dempsey

Fashion Statement

Rating: 4.9


You made a chain-mail dress
out of cut-out Coca-Cola cans.
Perfectly...painstakingly crafted.
On a hanger your dress
rattled angrily in the breeze

as the wind blustered in the window
throwing your preliminary drawings around.
Every gesture
became musical.
A yawn tinkled.
A kiss clanked.

Stroking me or
stroking the cat
each had its own
musical motif.
Your chain-mail dress
sprung forth a nipple

and then – hid it.
Flashed your sex
and then – forbid it.
As a male
I was quite intrigued by it.
I was a knight in distress.

You were a lady in shining armour.
As if I had been sleeping
to your beauty
...you kissed me awake.
You smirked:

“ Listen bud, Princess to Prince like,
I’ll show you where the chink in my armour is! ”
You divested yourself of your dress.
It clattered to the floor
glittering...coiling

like a silver shining serpent.
You breathed
upon my lips
(kisses tasting of expensive wine and cheap cigarettes)
“Kiss me...my love.
Discover me anew!
And I will show you
a thing or two.”

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Cheryl Lynn Moyer-peele 23 August 2007

Donall - This is ironic, but my ex-husband used to belong to the Society for Creative Anachronism. He used to put on his chain link and a satin skirt and go fight a war to win Pittsburgh, the losing knights were given New Jersey. Anyway I used to listen/watch him tinkle all over the house..................well, you know. I had forgotten this. Thanks for the memories! Cheryl

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Scarlett Treat 23 August 2007

All sorts of games crossed my mind when I read it...peek-a-boo, come hither, hide and seek....................now, I am blushing! !

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Dónall Dempsey

Dónall Dempsey

Curragh Camp, Co. Kildare, Eire.
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