Kumarmani Mahakul

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Fast - Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

Winter, the herald of summer moves fast,
People observe winter festivals with fast.

A woman observes with her dear baby,
Taking care of her baby is her baby.

Some babies do play with a ball,
Wife says her hubby, 'have a ball'.

Hubby replies, 'game is my bag'
Biddy says, 'am I your lovely bag? '

'Yes, you are my lovely no bar',
Wife requests him not to wend bar.

Topic(s) of this poem: baby, festival, love, season

Form: Epistrophe

Poet's Notes about The Poem

Fast - moving quickly
Fast - go without food
Baby - very small child
Baby - one's special concern
Ball - a solid or hollow sphere
Ball - have a ball-enjoy oneself very much
Bag - particular interest
Bag - woman
Bar - barrier
Bar - place where drinks are served
Wend - turn, go

Comments about Fast by Kumarmani Mahakul

  • Pushpendra Patel (3/3/2019 9:36:00 PM)

    Water moves fast and time moves fast. Greatest love comes from God through light into Earth. We feel this. This is really great when love is transformed into light of love of wisdom. Love glows and grows with us. This is a great write and you are a nice poet. (Report)Reply

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  • Muzahidul RezaMuzahidul Reza (7/28/2017 9:07:00 PM)

    After summar comes the winter with a lot of festifals, great write, thank you for sharing the poem with us (Report)Reply

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  • Edward Kofi LouisEdward Kofi Louis (7/28/2017 1:46:00 PM)

    Her dear baby! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us. (Report)Reply

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  • Laurie Van Der HartLaurie Van Der Hart (7/28/2017 12:32:00 PM)

    Interesting play with words, Kumarmani. One could go on... (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, July 28, 2017

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