Fate Poem by Raken Marimuthu

Fate

Rating: 5.0


You have the subtle silent power to break my mighty drive
Tumble tables, crumble dreams and dampen my spirit
And bring to nothing all that is in me that are rare merits
Who are you that have so much of power to destroy my strive
Make me crawl to thy unseen feet and strip my manly pride
Just a stroke of your brush you wipe away dreams of men
A jerk of the land, tsunamis’ come, take kith’s and kens
You aren’t God for He is all loving, forgiving great human guide

Alas! Fate answers, I am your shadow and I am all your deeds
What you sow is what you reap by the universal law of nature
For every action there will be an equal reaction forever indeed
Your good deeds and bad deeds are all that you have nurtured
These deeds are in the womb of time in the form of seeds
They take form to bend and mend men’s life as they mature

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Our wills and fate do contrary run
Monday 4thJune 2012.9.30 am Khartoum
Raken Marimuthu
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ramesh Rai 28 November 2013

a good write.every action has equal and opposite reaction.the fate follows the karma as the wheel follows the footsteps of the ox that draws the carriage.

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Unwritten Soul 08 September 2013

Our body is always a sculpture of flesh, but our soul drives who we are, our identity destiny is agreement, but we seal in better documentation in real run with choices we picked God always given us a choice to change the way we wanted life to be and each will branch probability and that is destiny...and fate is what we can do we tried but it final nothing we can take over but we should try because at the end we may get good fate if we try to get proper way to reach it with our will and courage...if we cant get it, trust me God serves you better thing to us I like the positivity you flag here, ones can be so true to be self_Soul

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