Austyne Thomas

Father Francis' Letter (Pt 1)

Dear Lassie
although av been out 4 a while
ure stlill n my mind
i wsh 2 c u again, i dnt knw hw possible it is
the brotherhood is exciting though
but the times we spend 2gda are all the memories in my head
each night i pray God takes my sins away
pray He forgives me 4 yet a new sin,
But as I hope 2 wk up & all d tots of u gone
i cant help not thinkn abt u again
i c ure face on evry corner
as u walk pass me on evry hallway
I thnk am running wild
i'm missing ur warmth & mild
we try nt 2 b tempted
but evryday tends 2 draw me nearer 2 u,
i forbid ths leads me 2 nowhere & shame
the ArchHead says ald make a gud Pope.
Free frm sin & temptatn of d world.
Evry1 thnks so 2, but here i am writing again,
I knw i love u & u still do 2
I could b d best of them all, bt without u
ild b miserable & loose it all.

Poem Submitted: Wednesday, December 17, 2008
Poem Edited: Wednesday, December 17, 2008

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Comments about Father Francis' Letter (Pt 1) by Austyne Thomas

  • Justin B (12/22/2008 11:10:00 PM)

    I'll be honest at first I thought the way you wrote these was annoying, but it catches on, it's unique, I like it.

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  • Daniel Richards (12/17/2008 9:50:00 AM)

    ive read both parts very profiund and sincere, well written many thanks a 9

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  • Ency BearisEncy Bearis (12/17/2008 5:26:00 AM)

    deep emotional thoughts..

    Ency Bearis

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  • Joseph Poewhit (12/17/2008 4:05:00 AM)

    Has a lot of sincerity

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