I hope my little brother is nothing like you
Your a monster that feeds on innocent minds
Why are you so up tight
Let go of me thats all you hear
Little bro try to stay strong don't pick up that mans bad ways
I wish i could over come that man
He a beast a dog
Unbearable
Can't understand me
Let my brother be free of you and your bad ways
This poem is a big ole dose of strong feelings. Good job. Rachel
i think you did good on this poem, it shows what going on with your father and brother...nicely writtin
From ur poem i can see that ur father left you with ur mom and ran off so: Your anger is a gun, touch and it goes off, but leave it alone, although temptation is strong, and you wonder if you are wrong. You say it is ok, maybe it is not, you warn your bro, or is this not so.
i like the hint of emotion in the poem the anger its clear that there a little hate
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
i don't think he will 'butif u can get away when ur father is in one of those moods.