Alone Poem by keturah bailey


Rating: 4.5

WHY? ? ?
Doesn't everyone have challenges
Doesn't everyone have disappointments
Or is it just me
I feel as though no one goes through what i do
DOES anyone feel my pain
See it's a struggle just expressing myself
When i do no one thinks its the right time
Can you relate or am i alone

Greenwolfe 1962 30 June 2008

A timeless question, but the truth is, everyone goes through the same thing suffering in silence. Just like you. GW62

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Karen Palero 30 May 2008

I could actually relate..! the feeling of being alone and the difficulty to explain it..ahh, that's exactly how I feel! and i think the disappointments and the other things that you are going through had actually also happened in other peoples life..The feeling of being different is funny when you realized that everyone feels different too, which makes you all the same...anyways, i had written a poem entitled 'Can You Be my NOBODY? ' it's actually the fruit of the feeling of being alone.

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Serenity Prayer 15 December 2008

i can relate. i feel that way too, especially lately. great job.

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Izik Alcox 01 December 2008

nice, simple and heart felt. I can definitely relate

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<font color =fusha>Amy 25 November 2008

i certainly can relate great piece

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Ashraful Musaddeq 10 September 2008

Can anyone touch someone's pain? Why? It is a nice short poem.10 for it.

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Rachel Smailliw 27 July 2008

Heck yes I relate! This is so relating it's scary!

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