Fatigued I Poem by Neela Nath Das

Fatigued I

Rating: 4.5


When I finish
all my tasks,
fatigued I
want to keep
my fevered head
in your lap.
There will be
nobody around,
only the air
and its rustling
mild sound,
I want to hear.
Under the Mistletoe
tree I wanna sleep,
on your chest,
my dear Nature
I'll take breath deep!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Khairul Ahsan 15 February 2014

It's a wonderful poem, so relaxing, releasing and soothing! 'Under the Mistletoe tree I wanna sleep, on your chest, my dear Nature I'll take breath deep! ' - These lines evoked very soothing feelings in me. Nice poem.

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Babatunde Aremu 09 December 2013

What a beautiful poem about nature! Nicely written

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Kanav Justa 08 December 2013

, , , it would feel great to sleep in nature's lap... a nice write

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Gajanan Mishra 07 December 2013

good write, thanks, I like it.

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