Fault Finding, Judgemental And Negative Poem by Lawrence S. Pertillar

Fault Finding, Judgemental And Negative



If you have come here to be,
Fault finding, judgemental and negative...
You can leave to be,
Fault finding, judgemental and negative...
Somewhere else to go to show,
What it is you can not let go.
But you will not leave me feeding your grief.
Step back and take that from my door.

Peace of mind I have found to keep.
You wont bother me with your sorrows.
Borrowed to follow your brought grief.

Too many love to get up in heads.
To feed them and leave them with grief.
And collected dread.
Too many will pop open cans of worms,
And pleased to have done the misdeed.
As if earned.

If you have come here to be,
Fault finding, judgemental and negative...
You can leave,
To be..
Fault finding, judgemental and negative,
But...
Not with me.

Thursday, February 25, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Abhilasha Bhatt 25 February 2016

Many people around us try to find the chance finding fault in us and judge us with the negative result most of the times....Wonderfully narrated.....really a true one.....thanks for sharing :)

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