Lawrence S. Pertillar
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$10 A Gallon?

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$10 a gallon?
For what?

'Does that really matter now?
When it approached
One dollar per gallon...
You should have voiced your concern then!
Not when your pockets have gotten thin.
And deepened to hold more lint!
You want to make cents?
Put these sunglasses on.
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Pratanu Banerjee 14 February 2021
really amazing poem
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me poet yeps poet 02 January 2021
you are a topper went to mount Everest to search returned saw you at sea level in 2021 same as ME LOL PH
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Pilar Mogollon 30 July 2020
" ...To share with you their good attitude. IF they have some of 'that' left! ' " I feel the sentiment of that line so often so much.
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A B Faniki 21 September 2019
Nicely done. Thanks for sharing
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Janet Hanson 26 October 2016
I thought the message was clear and poignant, I really like this poem.
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Seamus O Brian 07 September 2016
Enjoyable. Thank you!
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Rose Kanana 26 August 2016
Good message...timely voicing of issues.
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Unnikrishnan E S 01 May 2016
Lawrence, A haunting poem, long after you have gone through it. Calling back again and again. Ordinary words, but extraordinary poetry. It just as Rabindranath Tagore wrote: That words have meanings is just the difficulty. That is why the poet has to turn ans twist them in meter and verse, so that the meaning may be held some what in check and the feeling allowed a chance to express itself. Yes, Lawrence, you have achieved a free flow of feelings. Much above the meanings and words. That is what poetry really is. Excellent. Congrats. Keep writing.
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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 14 August 2015
You might gain some sympathy, From someone who recognizes you are in disguise. And they are in the mood, To share with you their good attitude. IF they have some of 'that' left! ' Truly, if they don't recognize, then nothing and if recognized, the good attitude should be left in them The poem brings out the fading goodness in man and conveys the great message Loved reading the poem and added to my poem list
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Amitava Sur 18 December 2014
Congratulation Lawrence.... very well written aspect....
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