the feeling i hate the most
the feeling i have most of the time,
that feeling is the worst
it's like a bell's shime,
inside the head of the person that feels FEAR!
fear,
makes all the darkness appear,
it feels like noone's here,
No laughter, no smiles
no happiness, no succes
fear, what a horrible feeling,
a feeling that shakes the seeling
it's so strong
it's also so wrong!
who wants to live in the darkness of fear?
soon, if everyone is scared, the humains will disapear,
who knows what's next?
God only could complete this text...
(thankyou for reading my poem, enjoy)
I like this poem so much and i agree with Omar that the last line is great (God only.....) ......keep it up! ! Merna
very, very well dear it is wonderful & it proves that u r intelligent.10+++
i like this poem so much and i agree withOmar and Merna. thank u for giving me a chance to read your poem.
Only thing to fear is fear itself........well done............
Fear has a purpose Kuji if we did not feel it we would not seek faith.10
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
i liked the last line the most! ! ! ! ! ! (god only--) this poem caught my fancy..great job.