Fear? ? Poem by Rachel Hubbard
Fear? ?
This feeling of wanting to run away when things start to go my way what is it? I am not used to respect, care, love, smiling, or happiness so I try to run from it is it fear of falling? in love? falling into a trap? I am so used to negative people, attitudes, and situations. This whole being happy, smiling, and joy thing I must say is a little bit creepy! What is this? What am I to do? Run? Stay? Hide? I just don't know it feels so good yet all too familiar like I've seen it before like I've been here before. I become happy things seem well then out of the blue I am left once again broken life, broken heart, shattered emotions wishing I was never born. Is this worth taking a chance? What is this deep feeling I feel?
Is it fear? ?
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4/25/2024 1:04:37 AM # 1.0.0.1119
If I may offer some advice? feel free to take it or not. Your words are written well and well thought out, I believe they are more of a journal than a prose, still they are strong, but I would suggest you may want to go deeper, if you can, be specific about what caused the emotions you speak of. focus on one event, live in that events emotions, and then write about that. but what you have is strong and enjoyable to read. keep at it.