Fear & Other Death-Traps Poem by Nika McGuin

Fear & Other Death-Traps

Rating: 4.5


I am at a loss for words
sometimes too, you know
& life isn't always easy go, breezy flow,
not that I'd know, no
I haven't lived it yet

Haven't placed my bet, in this grand roulette
of life. Still, I know that what awaits me
is strife. But I must plunge forward.
The fear of never feeling & never living,
is far greater than the fear of failure
or even, the fear of a tragic death.
Because living in fear, ain't living at all

I know it well,
because these last few years
living in fear is all I've known, all I've done.
Fear of failure, didn't keep me from failing.
Fear of people, never shielded my heart
& fear of life, sure as hell
didn't stop it from passing me by.

Tuesday, April 21, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: fear,life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Daniel Brick 20 May 2015

WOW this poem is like the sonnet by Rilke that ends YOU MUST CHANGE YOUR LIFE. Your poetic vision in this poem is shining, with very little extra imagery to distract from the moral resolution. There's something it was important to say, now there is something important to do. For a poem that has the word DEATH buried inside the title, this poem is really 100% affirmation of life. Sometimes the poet has to walk on a very narrow edge so that she can credibly say what has to be said. Unless she has made that dangerous journey herself, she can cannot speak to others. Well, all that background stuff has been done by you in this poem. It's a watershed poem, it turns a page, and it's a clean, fresh page for your next poem! !

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