Feel Poem by Pitta Sudarshan Dev

Feel

Rating: 5.0


A mosquito bit me and said something
but it doesn’t know that I am waiting for that sweet nothing

A warm hello’s and sweet good nights whimsical at this hour of life
but they are of sure a romantic melody at this time of elegy and strife

I am not a April fool simple and the guy carefree to say all is cool
a warm thought on a cold mind; a revival from the deadly pool

A feeling fresh; a breeze fresh on dying soul; strange sonnet being sung anew
lots of smiles pushing ahead through many miles; energies full for this life anew

Sunday, July 28, 2013
Topic(s) of this poem: april,elegy,romantic,sonnet
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dave Walker 28 July 2013

A great poem. Like it a great write.

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