Feel lucky and
Tuesday,18th February 2020
You always feel lucky
when praised by beautiful girl
who dreams for your closeness
and brings inviting smile on the face
it becomes all the more important
when she presents
her inner feelings
with words quoted with meanings
if rose has such things to reveal
I think she has so much to feel
open the petals and spread the fragrance
she has the only chance
the stage is appreciated
when it is related
with beautiful words
it is real world for her
not all the people get same warmth
when she breathes close
opens all her cards
and whispers no words
Hasmukh Mehta
Every one should feel lucky always. This poem has deeper thought's reflection. This is very brilliantly penned.
Those people are really lucky who get the love of that special person whom they adore. Lovely poem, sir. Sangeeta Das, Delhi, Feb 18,2020
Lovely poem Hasmukh ji! Love does make feel one lucky and on top of the world! Especially liked these lines: it becomes all the more important when she presents her inner feelings with words quoted with meanings Giti Tyagi, Patiala, Feb 18,2020
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This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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