Feel No Sore Any More Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Feel No Sore Any More

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Feel no sore
Thursday,25th October 2018

I felt it as the terrible loss
but you chose
to be firm in your resolve
and left my love

I was puzzled
and led
to believe that it was simple haste
that made you test the separation

I was simply terrified
when you lied
that I was not honest
whereas I had tried my level best

I know "the days shall be troublesome"
it has broken me at all the levels
I must gather the strength
and stand of my own to go at any length

come what may
I shall stay
as decisively as was before
and feel no sore

Hasmukh Mehta

Feel No Sore Any More
Wednesday, October 24, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: october,poem,separation
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 25 October 2018

welcome andrea jane cabrera 1 Manage Like · Reply · 1m

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 24 October 2018

come what may I shall stay as decisively as was before and feel no sore Hasmukh Mehta

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Dr Dillip K Swain 30 October 2022

I was terrified when you lied... terrific expression. Full marks for this wonderful poem dear poet.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 25 October 2018

Hasmukh Mehta I know the days shall be troublesome it has broken me at all the levels I must gather the strength and stand of my own to go at any length - one must get on with life...TFS Annapurna Sharma, Nellore, Oct 25,2018

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 25 October 2018

welcome Ranjan Yadav 1 mutual friend Message

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 25 October 2018

welcome Nilla Seraban 4 mutual friends 1 Manage Like · Reply · 1m

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 25 October 2018

Andrea Jane Cabrera Hasmukh Mehta amazing as usual.. great sir 1 Manage Like · Reply · 5h

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