Feeling Of Emptiness Poem by ritty patnaik

Feeling Of Emptiness

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emptiness
so close,
yet cannot be touched.,
just like
the faraway moon.

in the afternoon of the life
the length of time
is vast and long..
as if waiting for somebody,
has become your identity.

it is a restless feeling
to walk to the door,
and come back again,
to wait.

no! no one is going to come
its me and my empty world.

giving birth to my children,
and to my poems,
this emptiness,
is also born from me.
so, why so much distance? ?

sometime, i want to hug,
this emptiness,
like a mother does
to her baby.

sometimes, i need someone
to walk beside me
in this empty road of life.

but, like all relationships,
i know not why,
emptiness is
keeping distance from me!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bob Blackwell 22 July 2009

Ritty, your thoughts are my thoughts in this poem. I have done a lot of waiting in my life, also hoping for time to slip by to some future event. Absent loved ones all bring an emptiness. Now I only live in present time, I have no regrets no real future wants. Life is now, so I live right now. I love your poetry, it has so much heart. Bob

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Sarwar Chowdhury 14 July 2009

emptiness emitted very well! .......10+

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