alex nascimento

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Feelings - Poem by alex nascimento

I can’t stop thinking of you,
like a shoot you penetrated my heart,
consuming each muscle from it,
making me fool and invulnerable to this feeling.

Stupid feeling that makes me happy and sad,
Wish our hearts could beat together,
Why i just feel mine beating alone for you,
It’s like to feel no reason to live.

I’m waiting for you call,
Im waiting for your amazing words,
That touch my heart like a sweet breeze,
My tears for you wash my bleeding heart and,
give me a reason to live.

Wish you the best,
same knowing you will not let me make part from it,
I’m always there for you,
We’ll get lost together
Wish i could scream your name and,
this pure feeling for you,
Wish i could lay down by your side,
and dream forever with you.


Comments about Feelings by alex nascimento

  • (4/4/2009 8:15:00 PM)


    You write with passion and are so descriptive one can feel yur pain. T (Report) Reply

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  • Mitta Xinindlu (4/23/2008 2:10:00 AM)


    Very touching. I think that it's very good and I like the way you just expressed yourself. keep writing (Report) Reply

  • (4/21/2008 10:44:00 AM)


    Great piece, you wrote almost what I felt a few days ago. This one goes to my favorites. (Report) Reply

  • (4/11/2008 9:03:00 PM)


    hey dear.u wrote real things with deep observation, love and affection..it reflects ur young and fresh heart beating for ur lovely one.keep on giving such a nice feeeling.bye... (Report) Reply

  • (4/10/2008 4:36:00 PM)


    This poem is truly gorgeous. So thrilling and enjoyable to read. It really stimulates feelings of joy love and sadness all at the same time. You are an incredibly brilliant poet.
    ~Lacey~
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  • (4/10/2008 4:56:00 AM)


    let her come back to you...but this is not the end... look towards east. hope rising... promising happiiness...
    keep writing, alex
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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, April 1, 2008

Poem Edited: Friday, April 11, 2008


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