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I sit here surrounded by twelve great men
Not just my disciples, they are my friends
But one will betray me, he'd rather have gold
One will deny me, he won't want the truth told

The phone rings
I jump
Is it him?
It’s him!

I can’t even count
The things you’ve done for me
I can’t begin to list
Everything you’ve helped me through

I may have died three days ago
But to look at me you'd never know
I was hung on a cross, crucified
Brutally beaten and left to die

My disciples and I, tired and weak
Sit here alone, for them I weep
I asked them to pray to give me strength
For they do not know of all the great lengths

They hear my voice, shattered and weak
But they just don't listen for fear of me
They see my face, distraught with pain
But they only ignore me and just turn away


What's it like to be alone?
Horrible I'm telling you
You need to let your feelings out
But you sit and act like nothing's wrong

Thanks Calah for supplying an ending to this poem when I was mentally blocked in Chem! And thanks to Bethany for the inspiration and finally seeing what I see in him!

As I quickly glance your way
I get a small look into your heart

When two hearts come together
So perfectly
So flawlessly

As I hang here, stuck on this cross
I pray to my Father that not all is lost
I want them to see, I want them to know
The reason I'm here is only to show

I'm sorry I hurt you, I'm sorry I left
I just needed more, I thought it was best
I don't know why I thought we could be friends
I guess I didn't realize you'd need time to mend

In the beginning was the Word
And the Word was with God, and the Word was God
In which all was created
For the earth where we trod

You'll never understand
Just how much you hurt me
You'll never stop to think
That you've changed my life for the worse

I know you're my father
And I should listen to you
But I just don't understand
Why you don't care

I can’t be alone
Can you stay with me?
I can’t be without you
Can you stay with me?

I just wrote this one for kicks... it's never happened, I've never had a guy nice enough to do anything like this. I'm not sure whether it's very good or not. Give me a shout and tell me what you think. ~Lacey~

Her tears slip quietly
Down her face

Breathe in
Breathe out
I gasp
Choking on my own stale breath

I haven't thought of you in days
I keep myself busy in different ways
So my body gets used to not having your arms
I keep it busy, sometimes inflicting harm

The lightning flashes bright outside
Right now I feel I've lost my mind
I see the rain fall quickly down
I see it and I want to drown

I haven't heard from you in forever it seems
You've even begun to disappear from my dreams
But all of a sudden you're back in my life
And the pain is again cutting through me like a knife

Lacey UnKnown Biography

I am 18 years old and writing poetry is a passion of mine. Many of my older poems are cynical and depressing but lately they have been more upbeat and uplifting of God. God is so amazing and has been doing so many crazy, unexplainable, awesome things in my life. He is so good! ! ! ! If you don't know who He is... I would really like to encourage you to check Him out. Find a church that brings you closer to Him and stick with it. He will bless you beyond your wildest imagination. Without Him I would be nothing. If you have any questions feel free to send me a message and I will do all that I can to help you out. I'd love it if I could get some feedback just to know what people are thinking... about my poetry or God. I'm looking forward to hearing from you! ! ! God Bless! ! ! ~Lacey~)

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(2) The Last Days - The Last Supper

I sit here surrounded by twelve great men
Not just my disciples, they are my friends
But one will betray me, he'd rather have gold
One will deny me, he won't want the truth told
Wealth doesn't matter, nor does pride
What really matters is what's inside
I know what they will do to me yet I will show humility
I'll get down on my knees and wash their feet
To show them what they mean to me
I pray that this will all go fast
So I can see my Father at last
I know I will soon be crucified
Hung on a cross, left to die
But I sit here surrounded by twelve great men
Not just my disciples, they are my friends

Lacey UnKnown Comments

Nathan Thompson 23 August 2012

I enjoyed your poems about the Lord and about fatherhood: topics I've written about too. You are a gifted writer, keep it up.

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Hannah Martin 12 August 2008

I love the Miracle you wrote on my comments. I thought that it was a really true miracle. I love your dedication to God and how you get throught life with God and friends. I really do hope that God with be with you through Highschool and maybe even College! Book of Mathew <

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MCKENZi : ] 17 March 2008

a VERY good poet! her poems are very intense. cant get enough! ! : ]

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