Fetish! Poem by Jaya Das

Fetish!

Rating: 5.0


I plucked the rose
and it's petals fell off......

Fetish!
Sunday, January 22, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: obsession
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Hans Vr 12 February 2017

One of the strongest two-liners i have read. Good!

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Sister Frances 22 January 2017

My friend you captured how I felt a few days back. Like the centre that holds me together gives way. 10++++++ how amazing how so few words can mean so much :)

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Jaya Das 22 January 2017

thank you dear

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Unnikrishnan E S 22 January 2017

Hi Jaya, It is the petals that fall of on the way, that makes one's life. If all were roses and no thorns, life would have been equally miserable. Lovely couplet. Thank you for sharing..

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