Fiction Poem by Brandon Lucero

Fiction



I watched you breathing
I wish you saw
the world fell away
even the flaws

Stopped taking chances
kept you safe
while you slept

The time is fine
said I'd be there
instead I crept
into nowhere

Coming back to you
can't resist
though I tried
one day you left
my soul died

Now my dreams
are pure fiction
thoughts betray me
over and over
again and again

Saturday, July 4, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love and loss
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ray Lucero 19 July 2015

Excellent poem...Poignant and well written.

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