Fight Within Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Fight Within

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Question arises
And surprises
To many about cry in wilderness
I clearly object and press

My comments are liked
And almost praised
Many respond with thanks
I admit with frankness

I shall be earner of more zero
That shall not make me hero
Sometimes I shall be made laughing stock
Or target of simple jokes

Let poems be not read
Let them remain in dead sore
But the system has certain drawbacks
No one should be freely allow to stake special position

I shall remain
And fight within
Shall raise voice of dissent
But not remain absent t!

Wednesday, November 12, 2014
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 13 November 2014

I agree and perceive the Message Tom Kennedy9 minutes ago If your a Poet or claim to be........You should be honest everywhere.....By their fruits you shall know them. Comment +1 12 Nov

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 13 November 2014

xnice poem i love it Helen Setta 31 minutes ago That shall not make me hero.... Comment +1 12 Nov by hasmukh amathalal | Reply

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 12 November 2014

Encouraging Jen Tempest47 minutes ago very encouraging

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 12 November 2014

I LIKE IT Helen Setta 5 minutes ago Many people fall victims....

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 12 November 2014

Question arises And surprises

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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