Fighting For Honor Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Fighting For Honor



You were real fighter
And sought after
Some readdress for unfortunate people
That was your first crime to inflame the struggle

I heard your name
But could not be blamed
You were threatened in librated country
That was real pity

You are lone star
Single handedly fighting thought war
No one has cared or paid attention
Two countries face strained relation

It was objected by religious fanatics
The people had no point including to critics
The demonstration were planned to destroy peace
You are victim of such process

At last we see hope of ray
That may stay
For longer period to shine
We shall certainly see the reasons

We see the reason
For sighting reason
You were real liberator
A woman fighting for honor

Saturday, November 29, 2014
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 29 November 2014

Nice work sire... It has been awhile I have read your work. It makes me feel harp reeling this... Greetings...! 8 hours ago by Jodekss Gloatkenf to Fighting for honor

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 29 November 2014

well done SATHEESAN RANGORATH11 minutes ago a well written thoughtful poem with apt vocabulary and great imagination. Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 29 November 2014

good message Steve Goldsworthy8 minutes ago like the theme of the writing - well structured - last paragraph was very powerful - you brought it home well - good stuff! Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 29 November 2014

Form and Style Joey Garcia11 minutes ago Excellent

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 29 November 2014

You were real fighter And sought after

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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