Finding Peace (Sad) Poem by Poet of the River

Finding Peace (Sad)

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Don't cry,
suck' it up.
Go to the edge,
close your eyes.
and jump.

Fall down,
and don't get up.

Keep your eyes closed,
go to sleep,
and never wake up.

And if you do,
go back to sleep.
only then can you find peace.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Allemagne Roßmann 28 August 2011

Peace is the ultimatum..ur poem is mouthpiece here

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Ken E Hall 01 August 2011

Hi...well the story line of this poem is a cocktail of unhappiness...who wants to jump and never wake up...peace is within ones self...negative writing is no good for any reader...make your pen wake up...you can write so keep it going...regards

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