VAIDYANATHAN.T. RAM

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Fire-1 - Poem by VAIDYANATHAN.T. RAM

Oh fire, oh fire, oh fire,
It was without you,
Cannot make and have a cup of hot coffee,
Although there are,
In taste, nothing better than you.

Oh fire, oh fire, oh fire,
It was without you,
Cannot cook or eat something hot,
Although there are!
In taste, nothing better than you.

Oh fire, oh fire, oh fire,
Sometimes, somewhere,
You are the most wanted in cremation.

Oh fire, oh fire, oh fire,
It was without you,
Cannot light the candle or lamp to god,

Oh fire, oh fire, oh fire,
It was without you,
Cannot weld or mould to make,
vessels or any other things.

Oh fire, oh fire, oh fire,
It was without you,
We can't enjoy fire camp,
Singing and dancing around you.

Oh fire, oh fire, oh fire,
It was without you,
We can't see the children,
Their smile and happiness
When bursting the crackers,
With beautiful colours in the sky.

Oh fire, oh fire, oh fire,
We were not allowed touch you,
If touched, you hurt us,
When water comes near to you,
We find, that you are vanished.

Topic(s) of this poem: fire


Comments about Fire-1 by VAIDYANATHAN.T. RAM

  • Ryson Dsouza (3/19/2017 5:32:00 AM)


    Very well Expressed the Positive site, , , Lovely poem.... The usefulness and charm of the fire... A fire can also bring joy in our life is revealed in this.. Thanks for sharing.. You are an Amazing Poet... (Report) Reply

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  • Abdulrazak Aralimatti (11/27/2015 8:23:00 AM)


    Verily, we always have a negative perspective for fire
    and do not ponder on the merits and usefulness.
    A lovely write.....10
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  • Valsa George (11/15/2015 5:52:00 AM)


    When we think of fire, we first think of its destructive side! But by reading your poem, I realize how inevitable fire is in our life! Its benefits far surpasses its defects! (Report) Reply

  • Shakil Ahmed (11/13/2015 9:28:00 AM)


    yes, we need fire in every step of our life, you have painted the poem well with your thoughts, thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, November 13, 2015

Poem Edited: Saturday, November 14, 2015


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